Siento decir esto, pero las otras 2 respuestas me han alegrado el día, no recuerdo haber sido tan perezosa como para escribir una redacción en inglés, y he visto otra persona que pregunta el análisis morfológico y sintáctico de unas frases, en serio sois tan perezosos???muy fuerte. Yo si quieres te ayudo, pero no te escribo una redacción ni en broma.
There's a lot of diferent people in this world, but in most cases almost everybody is looking for finding a good job, with a nice incoming, to pay their bills, and even their personal issues, this means: cars, mobile-phones, clothes, laptops, and so on...(puedes añadir más cosas)
Unfortunately it seems that there is no other way to live this life. And the bad side is that the television doesn't help at all, because the more you watch some kind of tv-programmes, the more you think about famous people, all these celebrities, with smart cars, and not just one, but three or four, of course with giant houses and what to say about their amenities inside?swimming-pools, disco-places,....and many more examples like the game-area (billiards, table-tennis) (también puedes añadir más cosas, y programas como de MTV)
For another hand, all these stars say, that all of that doesn't give you happiness, are they saying that seriously?Well, that can be true, but, my opinion, it's that you really need money, maybe not being rich, but at least enough money to survive. However, whenever you see all that, you wonder if you can have it.
So, is it important to be rich? Obviously the person itself, whom is rich, sure does have its responsabilities to have all that money. (habla de ejemplos de ricos)
Qué te ha parecido?Espero haberte ayudado, y que me des los 5 puntos :-)